Thomas_Bakunin
Jun 23 2007, 02:10 PM
The war raged in my head - the injustice thrived
The answer seemed clear and resolute
You questioned how my end was contrived
And I fell into the deep never to return
I escaped my painful form
And you survived another storm
Violets bloomed and I awoke from the dreams that escaped me
And my restless ghost appears
In the wind and rain and heat and breeze
Fear not, I have only come to say "hello"
And fill the hollow of your heart to help make you whole
Now the birds begin to sing
The sun declares the new day
You inquired about the freedom road
And I showed you the path in every vein.
mr me
Jun 29 2007, 03:29 PM
Im just wondering what made u write this because it seems like some type of relationship either with urself or someone else im not sure. its really good stuff and im glad u had a place to show it to others.
Thomas_Bakunin
Jun 30 2007, 08:29 AM
mr me, thank you. It's pretty amazing what comes out when you start to open up and "feel" in the middle of the night. When I wrote it, it was intended for my loved ones.
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